Character you wish to be(name): Asher

Characters Gender: Male

Character's Race: Millennian (custom)

Powerlevel: 385

Zenni: 550

Alignment: Neutral

Character's appearance (image):


Age: 270

Height: 6'1"

Hair Color: Black

Eye Color: Marine Blue

Side Note: white aura

Characters Techniques:
Half the ki of the attack - Ki Shield - Cuts attacks in half.
Varied pl use - Spike Blast - Shoots a beam of energy.
Varied pl use - Ki destruction - Crushes a wave of energy around the target.

Planet you want to start on: Planet Earth

Characters story: (2 Paragraphs minimum.)

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Custom 1: Unlocking Ki (Permanent)

Powerlevel Requirement: 15,000
Powerlevel Gain: 2x Original Powerlevel
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Custom 2: Ki Mastery (Permanent)

Powerlevel Requirement: 50,000
Ki Gain: 300,000 added to your current Ki
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Custom 3: Natural Growth

Powerlevel Requirement: 600,000
Ki Gain: 2x Original Powerlevel
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Custom 4: Planetary Ki

When killed you revive on the planet you died on reborn with a pl of 950,000. If the planet is destroyed you have to go to other world. For no set backs you can go to otherworld instead.

Powerlevel Requirement: 1,000,000
Ki Gain: 15,000,000 added to your current Ki
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Custom 5: Universal Ki

When killed you revive on any planet; reborn with a pl of 15,000,000. If the universe is destroyed you have to go to other world. For no set backs you can go to otherworld instead.

Powerlevel Requirement: 20,000,000
Ki Gain: 50,000,000 added to your current Ki

Dude...This is crap, seriously. You're not allowed to have shields. Neither can you have varied transes for a custom. Also, the last one is incredibly dumb. You trans at 500mill, then gets killed by overpowered Gohan (>_>), and then sits back with 15mill.

1. Call my application crap when it isnt even complete..... How bout u worry about ur own shit?
2. I have not found a single no shield rule.... if there is I will replace it.
3. Did not see a thing for varied trans..... same applies as rule 2.
4. Where did you get transforming at 500 mill? The custom says 20,000,000.

1. I'm telling you what to improve.
2. It doesn't make sense that you for no cost can halve your damage >_>
3. Custom Templates are something you gotta follow. Either youre pure Rev, or pure Perm.
4. Transforming at 500mill was an example, as if transing at 20mill would be a waste of a huge boost. I just think that if you wanna, for some reason, trans later, it would be an incredibly bad idea.
5. See your own number 1.

1. Ok then
2. Did it not say Half the ki of the attack? Depending on the attack u use half the level of the attack's level......
3. I have not seen a rule saying that Ill see what a mod or admin says...
4. Ok I guess Ill change it perhaps...

Sure. No comment. Btw, i was Moderator 2 weeks ago, i know such. I got demoted for inactivity (IN THE VACCATION, MAN!!), though.

LOL vaction?

? Whatchameen? : P

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