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PostSubject: my post   Wed Dec 16, 2009 10:57 am

Character you wish to be(name): joseph Characters Gender: male

Character's Race: saiyan

Powerlevel: 500

Zenni: 500

Alignment: Good

Character's appearance (image):

Age:16

Height: 5 feet 7 inches

Hair Color: black

Eye Color: brown

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Characters Techniques: Kamehameha, power ball, spirit bomb

Planet you want to start on: Planet Vegeta

Characters story: hi, I'm a saiyan from Vegeta. When I was 15 I went to earth to learn some new techniques.So I meet some one named goku their and we went to the Kame house. He asked master roshi to train me and so he did. He taut me the move kamehameha for 2 weeks and I mastered it. One day me and goku spared and by accident he killed me.When I got in overworld I went to king kai's planet to train. While training he taut me the spirit bomb. So then finished training I went back down snake way and fail to hell. I fought raditiz and learned power ball. I went back to earth and spared with goku, this time I won. So then I went back to planet Vegeta and defeated king vegeta. That's my story hope you liked it.

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PostSubject: Re: my post   Wed Dec 16, 2009 11:07 am

Errr...Let's do this again. I don't have a problem but roleplay is usually done in the third person but anyways, include an image, work on your grammar and capital letters a bit. Just a tiny bit and I don't see much of a problem after that. Also, your BB I'm trying to find someone.

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PostSubject: Re: my post   Sat Dec 19, 2009 9:59 am

I don't exactly like this. the sparring thing and all. I don't like the fact that his character has beaten the others. other than that (and his grammer and moves) I have no problem.
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PostSubject: Re: my post   Sat Dec 19, 2009 11:00 am

Im not part of the staff or anything but this is wrong. How can he have beaten the others? How did he get to Earth? Why does he get to write 1 paragraph while the minimum is 2? Defeating King Vegeta? That means you are the strongest Saiyan alive. All those questions, everything else is just perfect. But your story is very unusual and confusing.
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PostSubject: Re: my post   Mon Dec 21, 2009 8:56 pm

I'm sorry, but Grinite and Batuella are right. Let me list the problems, and why they are problems:
1) He cannot, and I repeat, cannot know canon moves, unless he has actually learned them from the actual characters (as in, from those who have rped them, not npc)
2) Goku killed the guy by accident? Okay... I find that very hard to believe. I mean sure Goku is powerful and all, but his first post was only a few months ago (add in a few extra fictional months) so by the time this Joseph and Goku had battled (being a year prior), Goku would've been the exact same strength, making it impossible for him to kill Joseph without killing himself. And so far, I don't think our Goku has died yet, though I may be wrong in that account.
3) Why in the heck would Raditz be willing to teach anyone? I mean c'mon, I know this is an AU roleplay, but the character personalities are mostly the same. And Raditz was an utter ass, he wouldn't teach someone. That and how did he get to Hell when he hasn't died either? (again correct me if I'm wrong guys)
4) King Vegeta had a power level of (sorry for invoking the meme) of over 9000!!!! And though someone is gonna need a big explanation as to where all that power went should someone decide to rp as him, the point of the matter is, Joseph wouldn't be even close to being strong enough to beat him.#

As for the space pod, I personally see no trouble with it as long as you kindly remember that you will not have said space pod should you start rping.
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PostSubject: Re: my post   Mon Dec 21, 2009 11:54 pm

I have to say jbmaster is errr...very creative. I'm going to ask, how do you accidentally kill someone? Custom moves aren't so hard to make. I can see Raditz teaching someone if they were EVIL but was he EVIL before he died? OMGGGGGGG...It's a effing Goku clone. Then how can you beat Goku after being revived, if he accidentally killed you? I can imagine Goku getting stronger, and to accidentally kill you meant that he didn't use full power.
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PostSubject: Re: my post   Tue Dec 22, 2009 4:48 am

Not accepted, besides he hasn't gotten on since thursday =/ forget it.

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