Asher

Posts : 35 Join date : 2009-09-01 Age : 28 Location : Namek

Character you wish to be(name): Asher

Characters Gender: Male

Character's Race: Millennian (custom)

Powerlevel: 385

Zenni: 550

Alignment: Neutral

Character's appearance (image):

Age: 270

Height: 6'1"

Hair Color: Black

Eye Color: Marine Blue

Side Note: white aura

Characters Techniques:
Half the ki of the attack - Ki Shield - Cuts attacks in half.
Varied pl use - Spike Blast - Shoots a beam of energy.
Varied pl use - Ki destruction - Crushes a wave of energy around the target.

Planet you want to start on: Planet Earth

Characters story: (2 Paragraphs minimum.)

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Posts : 35 Join date : 2009-09-01 Age : 28 Location : Namek

Custom 1: Unlocking Ki (Permanent)

Powerlevel Requirement: 15,000
Powerlevel Gain: 2x Original Powerlevel
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Custom 2: Ki Mastery (Permanent)

Powerlevel Requirement: 50,000
Ki Gain: 300,000 added to your current Ki
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Custom 3: Natural Growth

Powerlevel Requirement: 600,000
Ki Gain: 2x Original Powerlevel
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Custom 4: Planetary Ki

When killed you revive on the planet you died on reborn with a pl of 950,000. If the planet is destroyed you have to go to other world. For no set backs you can go to otherworld instead.

Powerlevel Requirement: 1,000,000
Ki Gain: 15,000,000 added to your current Ki
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Custom 5: Universal Ki

When killed you revive on any planet; reborn with a pl of 15,000,000. If the universe is destroyed you have to go to other world. For no set backs you can go to otherworld instead.

Powerlevel Requirement: 20,000,000
Ki Gain: 50,000,000 added to your current Ki

Subject: Re: Asher Tue Jan 05, 2010 11:55 pm

Dude...This is crap, seriously. You're not allowed to have shields. Neither can you have varied transes for a custom. Also, the last one is incredibly dumb. You trans at 500mill, then gets killed by overpowered Gohan (>_>), and then sits back with 15mill.

Posts : 35 Join date : 2009-09-01 Age : 28 Location : Namek

1. Call my application crap when it isnt even complete..... How bout u worry about ur own shit?
2. I have not found a single no shield rule.... if there is I will replace it.
3. Did not see a thing for varied trans..... same applies as rule 2.
4. Where did you get transforming at 500 mill? The custom says 20,000,000.

Subject: Re: Asher Wed Jan 06, 2010 1:40 am

1. I'm telling you what to improve.
2. It doesn't make sense that you for no cost can halve your damage >_>
3. Custom Templates are something you gotta follow. Either youre pure Rev, or pure Perm.
4. Transforming at 500mill was an example, as if transing at 20mill would be a waste of a huge boost. I just think that if you wanna, for some reason, trans later, it would be an incredibly bad idea.
5. See your own number 1.

Posts : 35 Join date : 2009-09-01 Age : 28 Location : Namek

1. Ok then
2. Did it not say Half the ki of the attack? Depending on the attack u use half the level of the attack's level......
3. I have not seen a rule saying that Ill see what a mod or admin says...
4. Ok I guess Ill change it perhaps...

Subject: Re: Asher Wed Jan 06, 2010 1:53 am

Sure. No comment. Btw, i was Moderator 2 weeks ago, i know such. I got demoted for inactivity (IN THE VACCATION, MAN!!), though.

Posts : 35 Join date : 2009-09-01 Age : 28 Location : Namek

LOL vaction?

Subject: Re: Asher Wed Jan 06, 2010 2:26 am

? Whatchameen? : P

Posts : 35 Join date : 2009-09-01 Age : 28 Location : Namek

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