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PostSubject: Baki Ookami WIP   Baki Ookami WIP Icon_minitimeThu Aug 13, 2009 3:12 am

Character you wish to be(name): Baki Ookami

Characters Gender:male

Character's Race: Full sayiam

Powerlevel: 500

Zenni: 500

Alignment: Good

Character's appearance (image):
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Age:16

Height: 6'2

Hair Color: black

Eye Color: black

Side Note: (Optional) has a tail

Characters Techniques:

name: Flying
colors: N/A
description: This is the ability to fly using one's Ki. The user simply controls their energy and pushes out from underneath them allowing them to fly.

Name:spirit cannon ball
color: blue
description: one of baki's original technquies learned when controling his ki. when he began using i lasts he didnt know how much to put in each hand and put all his ki into a single blast of ki. it looks small aat first but on impact it widens into a devestatingliy smaller version of the spirit bomb. on impact the ball explodes into a blast radius of 5 miles and has the smae power of a spirit bomb.

energy wave:
color: blue
description: the user simply puts his hand forward whith his palm opened and releases a blast of ki form his hand.

Spirirt Cannon Bast- baki cuffs his hand gathering as much energy into it as possible. then it releaase to what appears to be a normal ki blast but then upon impact widens and releases a devestating blow to a opponet with serve damage and with dammage to everything withen a mile radius. baki has a strain on his ki attack and becomes slower after this attack.

Burning Attack - Future Trunks' trademark attack, this is first seen when he fights Cyborg Frieza. Frieza easily dodges the attack, but the point of the attack was not hit Frieza, but simply distract him from getting sliced in half by Trunks' sword. To perform the attack, he does a strange system of hand movements, and then ends it by making a spade like shape with his fingers in which a Ki Ball shoots out.

Crusher Ball - Jeice uses this attack during the Frieza Saga. He charges a medium sized ball of energy in one hand, then hurls it at the opponent.

Energy Barrier - With this technique, the user can create a shield around themselves which can withstand many attacks as long as the person has enough Ki to supply. An example of when this was used is when Gohan creates one to protect himself, Piccolo and Krillin from getting sucked into the Dead Zone.



Planet you want to start on: Planet Vegita

Characters story:
Baki was born as the son of a middle ranked soldier. baki was trained at a early age to fight and was taught to not show sympathy for those who were weaker than he was. baki thought this was wrong at first when he was younger but over the years he has become more distant and colder to those around him. he is constantly working hard to "please his mother and father" and obey his fathers and friezas wish to the deepest fufillment he possibly can. baki often trains alone or challenges someone to a spar to become stronger and thinks of himself as a "stronger sayian" than normal people. he decided to leave his mother and father and become a guard for the royal family. their he leanred diffrent technquies of ki attack like crusher ball, burining attack and his most powerful move the spirit cannon ball. he trains daily is clsoe to becomeing a elite sayian.

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PostSubject: Re: Baki Ookami WIP   Baki Ookami WIP Icon_minitimeThu Aug 13, 2009 3:26 am

Friendly member advise improve it a bit first..
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PostSubject: Re: Baki Ookami WIP   Baki Ookami WIP Icon_minitimeThu Aug 13, 2009 3:29 am

Alright, as one of the moderators of the forum. Iv'e got to say that its quite terrible, you have loads of spelling mistakes..I mean what the hell is a full saiyam? You haven't even one a character story an the presentation is quite crap. I'd say deny this but its up to the other moderators aswell.
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PostSubject: Re: Baki Ookami WIP   Baki Ookami WIP Icon_minitimeThu Aug 13, 2009 3:32 am

i was finishing it since currentyl i am sick and my stomache was hurting like hell in RL. also i was editing while you two replied to this. also try typing okay with a belly ache the size of texas without making any mistakes. i admit i tried rushing this app but i belive i fixed it.
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PostSubject: Re: Baki Ookami WIP   Baki Ookami WIP Icon_minitimeThu Aug 13, 2009 3:35 am

Well though you edited it, I am going to agree with my moderator. Also the moves you just added are canon, and you are not allowed to have them. Denied.
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PostSubject: Re: Baki Ookami WIP   Baki Ookami WIP Icon_minitimeThu Aug 13, 2009 3:39 am

okay so if i remove some of the moves will i get it approved then or is it too late and not allowed to do anything else? also what moves do i have to take out.
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PostSubject: Re: Baki Ookami WIP   Baki Ookami WIP Icon_minitimeThu Aug 13, 2009 3:58 am

All of the canon ones. I need you to use proper grammar and english for that matter. Capitalize the beginning of your sentences and capitalize your I's.
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PostSubject: Re: Baki Ookami WIP   Baki Ookami WIP Icon_minitimeFri Aug 14, 2009 9:45 am

You spell Saiyan wrong which is not a plus. Also your bio makes no sense and all of your moves are canon even though you have a custom character. I will not allow this to go any further. DENIED!
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