Trunks

Characters Name: Trunks

Characters Gender: male

Character's Race: sayian

Alignment: Good

Powerlevel: 500

Zenni: 500

Character's appearance (may be an image): https://2img.net/h/i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb54/rlbreak/trunks-7.jpg

Planet you want to start on: earth

What are your starting techniques:Double buster,Burning attack

Characters story:Trunks helps out pan and kid goku in the GT series.Vegeta(is trunks dad)and bulma had a kid which is trunks.He is only half saiyan blooded because bulma is human and vegeta is saiyan.When the androids came,they killed gohan which made trunks go super saiyan for the first time.He uses a sword,which he got from tapion when he died.Trunks got hugge by vegeta for the first time when vegeta was majin.Vegeta blew up majin buu and he knew he was going to die too so he hugged him.He uses a time machine,thats why theres a future trunks too.the future runks killed cell before he could go to his final stat transformation.When trunks first appeared it was in the android saga.Everyone thought the father was yamcha but they were wron it was vegeta .Everyone was like .Trunks also works for the capsule corp with mr.breifs and bulma.

is that long enough

Okay..... I will have to say that the bio looks copied from wikipedia. I require that my members write their own biographies.

oh crap...i didnt know sorry

Make sure also to work on grammar and puntuation. Capitalize the beginning of sentences and the name of races as well as your I's.

Dude. Did you even read what me and Frieza wrote? NO CANON BACKSTORY! I might be coming off to you as a dick but it feels like I was just talking to a brick wall. Youv'e put in alot of effort I can see but you need for think of an original backstory and maybe sort out your presentation abit? We'll give you another chance to edit it but until then I'm afraid I'm going to have to deny it.

wow u dont gotta be so mean about it .gosh

;[ well I don't mean to be mean. I'm just beng a good moderator.

Umm, I think he should be mean, if you choose to just copy things from sites and not choose to do your own things or write out your own stuff for your characters, its demeaning to those who actually do.... Take a little pride in your writing and work and actual write it yourself. Why, plagiarize? It gets you nowhere and it can cause a good size legal headache for you, just simply do your own and enjoy your work and then have fun?

Kk Zekk. You are now an Enforcer.

Well actually no. Did you read the story line? We arent even IN GT!! Also you have to space out words after periods. 1 more chance.