I am sorry, but I doubt this will get accepted.
You're sentence structure is quite bad. You must have spaces after your commas, full stops and in a few other places. Also, after a comma there shouldn't be capital letters. Names should also start with a capital letter.
I do not understand your character's backstory one bit. It says that King Vegeta was killed by Frieza. If so, how could you be somebody who is dead? Also, in our RPG, it's a whole different reality to the canon Dragonball Z reality, and so, Goku is not the strongest Saiyan at the moment, but infact Bardock, statistically speaking.
Also, if you haven't noticed, King Vegeta is taken. Please make sure, if you re-apply, to check who's available on the list shown on this forum.
Try and fix up these mistakes, if you re-apply as a new character. Good luck!
That is all.