I don't think this should be accepted.
Why? Well, you've done alot of things wrong.
- There's no character appearance image.
- There's no character appearance description.
- You haven't even done two paragraphs, which is a low amount. In fact, you've just about done one.
- If you're not going to roleplay as the GT Baby, why write a GT story.
- This story isn't supposed to be gathered from the series, but from the backstory...
- Fix these problems, please.