Dwarr(my charectar)

Character you wish to be: Dwarr

Characters Gender: Male

Character's Race: Sayian

Powerlevel: 500

Zenni: 500

Alignment:Neutral

Character's appearance (image)

Age:15

Height: 7 foot 2

Hair Color: black

Eye Color: black

Side Note:

Characters Techniques:Special beam canon. shortly after landing on earth Dwarr saw a namekian and instintivly attacked him.The Namekian easily deafeted Dwarr.Shortly after Dwarr woke up on a mountain.The nameless namekians voice came from behind a rock he said his name was "Piccolo and that attack was pathetic".Soon after Dwarr decied to swallow his pride and asked "Piccolo to train him".Piccolo said "i can only teach you one technique the rest that I know are pacific only to namekians".For one week Dwarr was taught how to do the technique.Soon after Piccolo left the area leaving Dwarr to learn complety mastery of the move by himself.
Planet you want to start on: Earth

Characters story: Dwarr was born on planet Vegeta,His parents were injured in a battle when Dwarr was only 5 months old they were both, executed because they were "useless"as stated by the king. Dwarr was ordered to be executed,but the current king decieded(dont know how to spell that word >.>) to send him to a planet with green men to counquer it. Dwarr landed in a Namekian forest. Dwarr was picked up by a namekian who’s name was flute.
Dwarr started planning on how to counqer the planet at age 10 as Dwarr tried returning to his space pod Dwarr was ambushed by far more power powerful namekians,and put in a bag. Dwarr shouted at the namekians who had kidnapped him hurling insults and other phrases. Soon after Dwarr would be sent to an unknown planet through unknown means to him which was so primitave it took five years to get there. Dwarr stepped out of the ship,with a much more mature look on his face and much more patience from being trapped in the ship for so long Dwarr,quickly pulled his knife out and sheaths it as quickly as he unsheathed it he thinks to himself -this planet has higher powerlevels,even higher then the namekians who jumped me,before i take over this planet i need to become much more powerful then I currently am-

I imagine English is your second language. You need to work on punctuation and grammar. I want you to re-write this and make sure to space out periods and the beginning of a sentence. I don't mind spelling, but I was to be able to read it without being confused. Don't mean to sound like an English teacher, I just want my players to be able to understand you.

hmm is blast,fly,and other basic moves such as senseing and mouth blast count as skills?

Accepted, if you can convince someone to do a BB with you, then you can do one, but I am pretty lazy.